Your eyes, filled with ocean
are dynamic, restless and blue.
I mistook that the Great Artist, the God-
had made a mistake in His unique creation
by painting them ocean blue, not muddy brown.
Poured in your eyes is the turbulence of the ocean.
I wonder the salty drops you weep belong to the deep blue sea.
are dynamic, restless and blue.
I mistook that the Great Artist, the God-
had made a mistake in His unique creation
by painting them ocean blue, not muddy brown.
Poured in your eyes is the turbulence of the ocean.
I wonder the salty drops you weep belong to the deep blue sea.
12 comments:
marvellous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bful work! :)
(Just one suggestion....could you change the background to a lighter shade.. :-| )
Touching.. I cried today... and this poem when I read.. felt like it was written for me!
good one :)
Excellent work ....the connection between eyes and ocean well explained in very few words....Keep writing Netha.
Splendid!loved the correalation here..
good work netha :)
keep writing :)
amaZin lines
few words and you captured it all
good work
keep em comming
Simply amazing lines...
Absolutely loved it...Whose eyes were you talking about, huh? ;)
Keep such wonderful poems coming in! :)
@ Latika didi and J.,
Thanks for your valuable comments.
@ Hari, Sowmi, Destinys child, Bibi sir,Swati and Sorcerer,
Thanks for your valuable comments. Keep reading...
really nice poem...
Bt the title pic is quite scary..!!
@ Dhawal,
Thanks a trillion!!
I exactly had deep blue eyes in mind when I wrote this poem.
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